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Here I Lie

I hear the footsteps trod Above on new laid sod They put me in this grave A life I bravely gave Wars go on while some die I was one - here I lie Heaven waits so they say More than this hole I pray 3-17-20 Contest: Alexandrine Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 3/28/2020 4:56:00 PM
oh my, to lie in the ground , one's spirit actually still in the ground, that is a very sad thing to think about. But the message of this poem is fantastic and I really love this poem. For me a fave. Congrats for your number one win, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/30/2020 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Thanks for the visit....Larry
Date: 3/26/2020 10:02:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on you win in my contest with this poem, you know what I like _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/26/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thank you, Interesting form and I enjoyed trying it. Thanks for the placement!
Date: 3/26/2020 2:36:00 AM
Very well said Larry. It is so sad we live on a warring planet after so many wars. Congratulations on your deserving top win! xxoo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/26/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 3/25/2020 10:50:00 PM
Larry, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/26/2020 12:40:00 AM
Thank you Eve!!
Date: 3/18/2020 5:48:00 AM
Heart felt, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/18/2020 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 3/17/2020 10:27:00 PM
Very good Larry, best wishes...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/17/2020 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie..are things good with you these days?

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