Her Wedding Day

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Her Wedding Day The spiral staircase made her high heels sing, while from afar, she heard the church bells ring. Today, they'd pledge their marriage vows so true; before their friends and kinfolk, say I do. She reached the terrace off of the third floor; their chosen chapel, there behind the door. Alone, she viewed the beauty of the day and took a moment to thank God and pray. From here, the City churches pierced the mist; tall steeples now, below the clouds, sun-kissed. With a deep breath, she turned to enter now the place where she and her true love would vow... He was not there...her heart began to pound! The seats were filled...to terrace, she turned 'round. Below, she saw him leave the front door there... he closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square. May 11, 2018 Contest: One Nine and Sixteen Upgrade Version Sponsor: Viv Wigley Required Lines To Use: Line one: 'The spiral staircase made her high heels sing' Line nine: 'From here the City churches pierced the mist' Line sixteen: 'He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square'

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