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Her Lonely Heart Waits
She longs for an ending to her heartache Out on the boardwalk she hopefully waits For day after day and year after year Pining for her true love to reappear. She'd come to love her man with all her heart One day he gave news that he must depart He sailed away with a vow to return He never did and to this day she yearns. With solace celestial bodies appeared To advise this lady and dry her tears They told her one day soon her Prince would come That she'd be loved from the first moment on. Sharing many hours of ecstatic bliss Gentle caresses from his fingertips Transcending her into a trancelike state From which she would never wish to escape. She wondered if it would for sure be so That she could find love with another beau As she turned to leave she knew she'd struck gold There stood her Prince Charming, just as foretold.
13th January 2021

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Date: 1/14/2021 7:22:00 PM
Sigh! Such a pretty story. Adorable, and I hung on every word, Belle. ~ Old Softie, gw
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/14/2021 7:26:00 PM
Ah a old softie at heart, how nice. Thank you Gershon~ Belle
Date: 1/14/2021 9:29:00 AM
What a wonderful tale, I love fairy like stories, in fact I adore them, have written a few myself, love your creative mind and honest approach to your poems dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/14/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I also love fantasy and fairytale poetry, will look up yours... Bless you, hugs~ Belle
Date: 1/13/2021 3:04:00 PM
He came back, a lovely happy ending Belle. A well written romantic verse. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/13/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Tom, all’s well that ends well... Belle
Date: 1/13/2021 1:19:00 PM
from sadness to romance. Brilliant transition. ~~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/13/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Victor, a moment in time can change a life from the pits to heaven, or vice versa, one never knows what lies in wait beyond the garden gate ~~ Belle
Date: 1/13/2021 4:05:00 AM
- A charming and beautiful poem, Belle - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/13/2021 7:08:00 AM
So kind of you Anne-Lise~ Hugs, Belle :-)
Date: 1/13/2021 1:58:00 AM
Love this. It's romance and joy to the senses of those who love... a caress to the heart and a breath of hope to the soul. God bless you always, dear lady
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/13/2021 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina... “When there’s a space in your heart you can’t fill, there’s always someone out there who will.” God bless you always too, dear friend ~ Belle

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