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Help From Above

Starlight. Star bright First star I see tonight Science says you're not a star They say your light is planet Mars But can't I still just make a wish? A simple plea. A small request All I want is one true love A gift of light from up above Rockman :-)

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/18/2013 12:17:00 AM

Simply stated with sweet emotion.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 9/15/2013 4:23:00 PM

love it Rockman. - Venus, Mars, firefly jars, I wish on everything. love, Kathy

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/31/2013 1:54:00 AM

you rocks man

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2013 2:53:00 AM

How delightful! :) Go ahead and wish! Thanks ever so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem, My Jiggly Bits! I appreciated your visit to my work!

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/17/2013 7:43:00 PM

Nice little poem. I can hear a child's voice in this piece. Lovely.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/17/2013 1:48:00 PM

Aw....this is so sweet!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:01:00 PM

ahhhh, it is short and sweet and the last part of it is so precious. That was a touching ending for me. And what a coincidence. I was working tonight on a contest poem called StarShine!!! But probably won't post it right away. Thanks for letting me know you finally got a new post up. Randy??