Heavy Mountain

a mountain can hear her cries lost in the woods' vault cannot lift his ass

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/29/2015 2:12:00 PM

quite puzzling and engaging, rajat... the mountain has a heavy ass?.. huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:41:00 AM

Hahaha nette, the mountain was so lazy/heavy he could lift his body although he wanted to help the lady in distress. So, better be not a mountain so far "the damsel in distress" is concerned. love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 2:07:00 PM

Is the mountain the one referred to with an ass. That's funny!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:44:00 AM

The mountain is so heavy that he fails to do his duty here saving the girl. So Andrea run..run..run no fat . Love

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/31/2015 7:36:00 AM

No Andrea in fact the ass referred to here has the mountain.Love.