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Heaven Sent

My girlfriend’s love never ceases My girlfriend loves me to pieces My girlfriend takes away my breath My girlfriend just loves me to death Too young to be passing so soon (Services to be held at noon)

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/23/2014 8:44:00 AM

very clever, like it xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2014 12:51:00 PM

Wow I love this one! black s)c)ent humour, I would say :) // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/15/2014 11:23:00 AM

Ha, ha Tim....what a way to go! Cute write. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2014 11:55:00 PM

Hello Tim, OI OI OI! LOL, you sure know how to make an end to a good way to go... Enjoyed always~ Linda

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/14/2014 8:36:00 PM

You always have a way to make me smile !!! I love your sense of humor......are you sure you aren't related...?? (you remind me of the guys in my family!! :) and that is a good thing!