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...Hawaii's Fireworks

Hawaii's fireworks red white and blue sparks in air volcano exploding

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 12:51:00 PM

Oh my! How creative, Marie. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations Marie on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:58:00 AM

I loved that last line! Gave it a different feel--congrats, Marie :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:43:00 PM

Gosh, I am surprised this one is not coming from Linda over there in Hawaii right now! Do ou live in Hawaii? That would be so cool. Congratulations! LUv,Andrea

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 9:36:00 AM

I would love to see them. Lovely Haiku, dear Constance. Congratulaions on your in in Deborah's contest. Love, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:43:00 PM

Congrats Marie on your HM for your Haiku in the Fireworks contest ..with a bit of Hawaii I see .. for four nights now I see them.. enjoy your honor as u celebrate in style.. on the 4th of July.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

Date: 7/4/2010 4:33:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 7/3/2010 10:55:00 AM

Wow Marie, this is a scene I would love to see, wonderful Haiku >> James

Date: 7/3/2010 10:30:00 AM

Good use of imagery. Interesting analogy between the first and last lines. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/3/2010 6:28:00 AM

okies Marie just put the 3 dots BEFORE the word volcano in the title line all else is as request and now we just judge content and not form! BIG HUGS!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/3/2010 6:01:00 AM

I really love the unusual take on the subject! pretty please with sugar NO punctuation NO capitalization NO title. in the title line you put ...volcano explodes Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/3/2010 2:24:00 AM

Great use of imagery, nice work...Raul