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Haiku Untitled Was Too Cold

Haiku.2. 1/14 too cold fingers maneuvering pen poor wren has only one wing ———————————————————- (c)sally Young eslinger 1/14;2021hu

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2021 5:52:00 AM

Oh my beautiful poetess, one can only imagine what one can do with one wing. You can fly to the other side of the moon, caress the sun and bathe in the stars, its all up to you. Sending you the other wing via energy and love, my dear. Hang in there Sally, join me in meditation at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ybZC0mgq4bY we are all united under one wing of protection. Much love xo

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/15/2021 8:24:00 AM

Your inspiring comment has lifted my being to a height of Joy nearing the sweet flow of tearstat comes at the rise to touching God. Bless you! I will go toteutube. Big hugs Rose Rose!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 10:53:00 PM

wren with one wing. Lovely image and metaphor. ~~

Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/14/2021 11:05:00 PM

Hi, Victor, thanks. Sorry, tho I think you read the version with the typos just as I was editing. Wrens are lovely but hard to draw even when Jim doesn’t turn the heat down. Blessings to you!