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Haiku 70 -The Solitary Bird and Solitude

lone bluebird sings on my back porch swing I hug myself Or lone robin sings on the mountain porch swing I hug myself

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/5/2014 6:59:00 AM

This is sweet, I like the first one better.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/3/2014 11:03:00 AM

beautifully penned visions charmaine excellent pen dear friend god bless

Daver Austin

Date: 10/3/2014 10:28:00 AM

Love haiku, love these too. The hug is priceless. Thanks, Char, for turning me on to Haiku Journal. They accepted my rose haiku. Lve, daver

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2014 11:26:00 AM

I am so happy they did .Hurray!!If I come along other haiku magazines that are open for submissions.I let you know : ).

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/3/2014 8:04:00 AM

I hug you too! hugs hugs wrapped up with loves :)

Ma Yaseen

Date: 10/3/2014 2:46:00 AM

This is lovely, I love it... Well done Malik

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2014 10:55:00 PM

hey now this is called killing two birds with one stone. heeheehee. Love this concept, sweet Charma!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/2/2014 9:41:00 PM

hey little one! you don't need ONE & LONE you can use either or - you could also use A [a bluebird sings/ on the backporch swing- I hug myself] [a] means 1, one means 1, lone means 1 ... Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2014 2:08:00 AM

Yes dear Deborah my haiku mentor,you are right.I fixed it : )..Thankyou !!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/2/2014 4:43:00 PM

Two lovely birds sing...... On my old back porch swing....... I give you hugs........I love them...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2014 2:09:00 AM

Now that is a much nicer haiku Tim ;.)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/2/2014 4:03:00 PM

I love them both Char. I don't know what others will think.