Haiku 78

Haiku 78 haze blue days... others electric yellow my sometimes strangeness

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2013 7:03:00 AM

Kind of psychedelic, reminding me of old songs from the 60's, Crystal Blue Persuasion or Crimson and Clover! COOL!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/20/2013 8:03:00 AM

Great references! I didn't have them in mind, but I should have remembered them. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2013 3:22:00 AM

- Should be able to conjure .... - Well done Jack, like it!! - Have a happy day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/20/2013 8:04:00 AM

Thanks again, Anne-Lise... Jack

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/19/2013 8:24:00 PM

Oh, I like this.. My interpretation says this must be about happy pills and such... very well done :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/19/2013 9:36:00 PM

Well, something like that... jack