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Haiku 65

Haiku 65 taut threads of pain darkness behind my eyes clouds cry (Written for a friend.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2013 1:00:00 AM
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wow, now THIS is haiku!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/14/2013 8:16:00 AM
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A lot of pain though... Jack
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
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Hello Sweet, Jack, I feel like haiku tonight... and by the looks of it... you have many to enjoy.... so please do not mind the smiles I will leave behind... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
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ps... a sad thought, and imagery... :-( PD
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 PM
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A sad friend...
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Poet Tacito
Date: 7/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
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Let it rain. But, the sun shall return. Great job!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/11/2013 8:10:00 PM
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Thanks for reading my haiku, Drake... Jack
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/11/2013 4:38:00 PM
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pain and grief in this Jack well written Shadow x smiles
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/11/2013 4:44:00 PM
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Thanks for the kind words, Shadow... Jack

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