Haiku 44

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mood swings...

night then day then dark again

now the night zone

mood swings... night then day then dark again now the night zone

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2013 2:49:00 PM

I rather enjoy that dark zone!!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 5/9/2013 3:27:00 PM

I certainly wish I did, but I see your point. I much prefer the day part of the swing... Jack

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/6/2013 11:52:00 PM

This is why I like the twilight times... you get a little bit of both, instead of the one extreme. Clever indeed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/6/2013 9:31:00 AM

- I always admire your haiku poems, Jack - You are so clever with haiku!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 5/6/2013 10:04:00 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise. I hope you have a great week... Jack