Haiku 2

newborn stars join their elders~ paper lanterns

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/8/2021 9:55:00 PM

how delightful ~

Bukiwe Tiyane

Date: 12/7/2016 10:55:00 PM

Wonderful :) Rated 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2016 5:30:00 PM

another amazing write!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2016 12:30:00 PM

ohh, this is really good with a tremendous juxta in your last line, david... love it!..huggs

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/20/2016 5:03:00 AM

Wonderful haiku this is ...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2016 1:05:00 AM

This beautiful haiku has what anyone familiar with haiku could expect...that aha moment! It is brilliant and going into my faves David...where few haiku have gone before! 7 ; )

David Mohn
Date: 11/20/2016 9:31:00 PM

thank you ever so much Connie :)