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Haiku 100

Haiku 100 by warm candlelight a strand of pearls gently falls across her bare breasts

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Date: 11/23/2013 5:48:00 PM
Jack..this is classically beautiful... and my hat's off to you for your 100th haiku...wow...PS..did you get any of this nasty freezing rain I did yesterday? Yuk!
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Date: 11/20/2013 2:34:00 PM
Hi Jack, I appreciate you taking my feedback into consideration. I enjoyed reading this beauty again. A stunning piece!
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:24:00 PM
beautiful haiku, jack, erotic yet elegant...
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:09:00 PM
Thanks, Charlotte. I'm working on, thinking about your contest... Jack
Date: 11/14/2013 10:33:00 AM
ohhh, this is smashing in its breathtaking imagery.. pearls, candles, breast... let me sigh!.. greeat one, jack!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/14/2013 3:55:00 PM
Thanks, Nette. I always appreciate your comments... Jack
Date: 11/13/2013 4:24:00 PM
a very luscious image! No, I don't know of the sculpture you mentioned. I don't know much about those things.
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Date: 11/13/2013 6:29:00 PM
Thanks... Spiral Jetty is among the most important sculptures of the period, and occasionally disappears below the water surface. Jack
Date: 11/13/2013 3:57:00 AM
- Romantic!! - (Congratulations on your haiku 100) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 1:58:00 PM
My intentions exactly. I really like your new photo... Jack
Date: 11/12/2013 10:03:00 PM
I would change your to her and it will be perfection. I can picture the scene. This is an exquisite image. Thanks for letting me Know you posted it. Congratulations on hitting your landmark.
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:05:00 PM
Done... Thanks for the congrats and the great suggestion... Jack
Date: 11/12/2013 9:41:00 PM
Sweet- PD
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:48:00 PM
Thanks...