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Gonna B Hot

Billowing bellows Blatantly belching Blowing cold air Blazing the fire. Bloated to bursting Building the heat, Burning the charcoal Browning the meat. Burgers are ready Bangers are hot, Bread buns are toasted Brown sauce in the pot. 12/7/2020 Eve roper Alliteration contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/9/2021 2:57:00 PM

reeled me in with the title there, thought it was a saucy scorcher, but there was sauce in the last line lol :)

Simon Hamill
Date: 2/9/2021 4:19:00 PM

You can't use hot sauce on here.lol.:):):)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2020 3:13:00 PM

I like the flow of the b alliteration winning work. Congrats. Sara

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/25/2020 4:17:00 PM

Thank you.im new,but I am learning lots about different types of poems.hope your having a great Christmas.simon:)

Emilia James

Date: 12/24/2020 1:51:00 AM

Nicely and creatively done Simon, congratulations on your well deserved win, Emilia : )

Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/23/2020 1:50:00 AM

Fantastic! I can't wait for the summer. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/23/2020 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Joanna.cant beat a barbecue.have a great Christmas.simon:)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/22/2020 9:49:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/22/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you.hope you have a great christmas.god bless.simon

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2020 7:51:00 PM

Simon, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/22/2020 10:56:00 PM

Thank you eve.and thank you for my placement.hope you have a wonderful christmas.god bless.simon

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/8/2020 10:54:00 AM

I think this is so creative, Simon. An allitertive taste treat for sure -- Time to eat! G.L. in the contest, Gershon

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/8/2020 11:33:00 AM

Thanks gershon.it was fun.i am learning so much.ive purchased a book on all the different types of poems.lol.take care.simon

J. Summers

Date: 12/7/2020 1:02:00 PM

Oh yeah, a BBQ poem. What’s not to like.

Simon Hamill
Date: 12/7/2020 5:01:00 PM

Hi.you can't beat a good BBQ.lol. I'm quite new to all this,never heard of a alliteration poem. I'm learning a lot on here,some really people.thank you.take care.simon