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Giving Back

Growing old, like quartz and diamonds, the human being occludes. The trials of life, leave cracks in the soul; grind the body back to dust. All life recycles, in life after life; we all give back.

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 1/10/2015 3:13:00 AM

Very good. I enjoyed it. Thank you very much.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/13/2015 8:28:00 PM

I am glad...thanks for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2015 2:01:00 PM

Ashes to ashes and dust to dust. At least we do not rust! (sorry, just had to do that silly rhyme). Very well done sijo.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 5:58:00 PM

I am glad that we don't...thanks for your comment.

James Fraser

Date: 1/8/2015 11:35:00 AM

This we do, and whilst being here, one has to make the most of it as I intend to do, and eventually I'll give myself back. Love these words of yours M.L.K. - James :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 5:58:00 PM

We do, indeed...thank you James.