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Written - 3rd August 2024

I look at stars in sky of midnight blue Moonlight and roses remind me of you I see and hear you in all sorts of things In the babbling brooks, rivers, streams and springs. Birdsong in the morning, droplets of dew White clouds passing by, and bright sunshine too In the patter of soft showers of rain In the rendition of a sweet refrain. In spring when fresh leaves upon trees appear The summer that fills humans hearts with cheer Autumn that paints the world red, rust and gold Fireside in winter when weather is cold. Singing carols at Christmas, sung with joy For the birth of the world's sweet baby boy Celebrating with family and friends A special time when peace on earth transcends. The laughter of children at play outside Sight of a groom and adorable bride All things remind me of my mother’s love Gilded in gold dust from fairies above.

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Date: 8/3/2024 9:58:00 AM
WOW!!! What a Lovely Write with a Great Ending. Great memories are the best kind to have. One can see/hear love ones in many places....  Have a wonderful/blessed day...................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/3/2024 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Paula, loved ones are always near and dear. Have a lovely blessed day yourself… Beryl
Date: 8/3/2024 8:30:00 AM
Awwn your mothers love , and how everything beautiful and in nature reminds you of her youv described in the most delicate and elegant manner dear beryl. I really love the opening lines in this and also how you’ve ended it. Heartfelt and touching poem. Sending you light always. Pleasure reading this gem! A fave for the emotions and imagery youv painted in eloquence
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/3/2024 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Ink, your comments and the fave are truly appreciated… Beryl
Date: 8/3/2024 2:27:00 AM
Brilliant rhyme poem with great imagery that soothes the heart. I certainly loved it. It flows so smoothly.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/3/2024 10:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, your words mean a lot… Beryl

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