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Poetic Form: Other/Poi
Inspired: 2024 April 27
Image: N/A

Running the Hall first, it depends who they'll call tripping those bookends unleashing them savages having your companions between losing-it challenges nothing-less assuring all check and balances

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2024 9:21:00 PM

Cool form, Hilo. Good example.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2024 11:13:00 PM

Happy to encourage, Andrea, with my simple post, being my nature, that some may find challenging. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/28/2024 4:15:00 PM

nicely done! I like it!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2024 11:09:00 PM

Thanks, Sara, s o r r y another snuck-by, Aloha, William