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Poetic Form: Free Verse
Inspired: 2024 May 25
 
 
*6th Place*
Why did I become a poet
Contest Judged: 2024 May 26
Sponsored by: Jay Narain
 
 
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________________________________________________________________ Like the Sun, in its brightness and thoughts that equals it shine, goes boldly about. Ventures without fear to be another Shakespeare with another sonnet, or a hundred. Take a drive and see Aurora rise, like Maya Angelou on a road, and get lost in Robert Frost. The Sun, in its brightness, seems to soar solely in the sky. The moon shares the sky with the stars in darkness. Brightness and darkness appears to be their illegitimate children Brightness, darkness, shadow: a poet shines.

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Date: 5/29/2024 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/29/2024 9:06:00 AM
Mahalo, Paula, for your sincere generosity, blessings my dear Poetess, Aloha, William
Date: 5/28/2024 8:48:00 AM
I love your inclusion of some of the maestros of poetry. A unique touch. Congratulations on your placement William :-) Thank you for your encouraging poetic commentary. It was very much appreciated :-)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/29/2024 2:42:00 AM
An appreciation in-kind, thank you, and lastly, it was an appropriate pleasure to have enlightened, a welcoming truly, Aloha, William
Date: 5/26/2024 7:59:00 PM
"Take a drive and see Aurora rise, like Maya Angelou on a road, and get lost in Robert Frost." - A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2024 8:05:00 PM
Christuraj, equally, Aloha, William
Date: 5/26/2024 3:49:00 PM
So cool, William. Congrats
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2024 7:07:00 PM
Mahalo, Andrea, Blessings, William.

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