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Frozen In Time

Light tropic breezes carry colorful balloons across taro fields While ancient homesteads dotting the quiet landscape stand frozen in time Written on 5/24/2015 Haiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:45:00 PM

nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win:)Alexis

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 9:07:00 PM

LAURA. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/13/2015 10:07:00 PM

Yay! Thank you so much for placing me in your contest, Skat! I really appreciate it:)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/29/2015 9:44:00 AM

An absolutely touching capture of just one of many gifts life gives to us, yet we often do not appreciate. Excellent lines.

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:27:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/28/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thanks, Funom! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the rating, too :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2015 10:43:00 AM

Laura, I enjoyed this beautifully written double haiku! The imagery is so lovely! Well done, my friend! Pandita

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/27/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thank you, Pandita, for your kind and encouraging comments! I appreciate it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2015 12:51:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Laura - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 1:40:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for stopping by to comment on my poem :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 12:19:00 PM

Just beautiful. Great imagery here, Laura.A 7. Blessings for the contest! . Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim! I really appreciate you stopping by and the rating, too!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/25/2015 9:26:00 AM

Love the blend of two images which you cleverly weave!! olive eloisa :)!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 11:18:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Olive. I appreciate them :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/25/2015 1:42:00 AM

Laura, very nice, love how you combined the two visuals and created these lovely haiku's, very creative 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, burning daylight day lily

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words and comments, Broken Wings :)