Fresh Night

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while full blooms quiver cool waves are pounding the rocks stars are in her eyes backwards and forwards the wind wanders everywhere bringing far off scents small splashy puddles remnants of a rainy noon moisture in the air he catches her eye then he smiles at her and winks a spring flirtation

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2021 1:02:00 AM

Four brilliant haikus. Loved the way you inserted a bit of romance.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/18/2021 2:39:00 PM

You have my deep thanks for your appreciation. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/17/2021 5:29:00 PM

Excellently constructed, Evelyn, your haikus are lovely, the topic is appealing, and the overall look is superb; your excellent phrasing adds to the radiance of this artwork.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/17/2021 8:38:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely, generous comment, Lasaad. I hope you have a wonderful week, Evelyn