Forever In Your Eyes

F ervent emotions quietly flow through my contented heart
O ver the love I feel when watching you in peaceful sleep.
R esplendent reveries of you, I lovingly recall from our start.
E nchanting was the moment we first met; a memory to keep.
V elvet nights we spent together, gazing at the stars above.
E ach one seemed to whisper, "You fit like a hand in a glove."
R adiant was their illumination as we realized,  'this is love.'

I mpassioned by desire, I have been smitten by your charms.
N akedly bared is my heart when you hold me in your arms.

Y ielding is my soul, for you captured me with a glance.
O ne look from your sultry eyes and I was mesmerized.
U nited in matrimony, we share the rhythm of love's dance.
R omance as genuine as ours is to be treasured and prized.

E ager am I, my darling, to wake you with my sweetest kisses.
Y et, I hesitate to rouse you if you are dreaming of loving me.
E nticed by my hunger for you; what sensual temptation this is.
S tarry-eyed when you wake,  is the look I'll always long to see.


7/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/27/2016 6:02:00 PM
Marti, a golden pen you write, with wonderful flow and very romantic. Thank you so very much for the congratulations on my poem “Forever In Your Eyes”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:34:00 AM
Congrats Marti, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 11:37:00 AM
A softly romantic win. Congratulations Marti...
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:49:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:31:00 PM
This is lovely. Well done, Marti, deservedly placed so high, Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:57:00 PM
Marti, congratulations on your Second Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:25:00 PM
Marti, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 3:46:00 PM
You nailed it Marti many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2016 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations Marti !!
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:50:00 AM
Hi Marti, I really enjoyed this piece. It was so sweet and romantic. Congratulations on your 2 nd place win. It was so well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:36:00 AM
Just a beautiful, well written poem, thanks Marti for another excellent masterpiece! Congrats on your fine placement!
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Date: 7/12/2016 3:56:00 PM
simply fascinating with great wording and flow, marti... huggs
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Date: 7/12/2016 1:49:00 PM
You did a good job with this.....loved the way the words flow.....good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/12/2016 12:40:00 PM
Fabulous rhyming acrostic - good luck in the contest Marti:-) hugs jan xx7
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