Forbidden Fruit

Unrequited love is the forbidden fruit of the heart. And if you lust for its taste, it will tear your heart apart. A love that can never be; drains dreams of all their magic. And like a moth to a flame, results are often tragic. Behind a facade of smiles, you try to hold back the tears. Yet hope is mired in despair; where it has languished for years. Loneliness results in a deluge of sad emotions. And it feels as though you've cried enough tears to fill oceans. You suckle reality on the bosom of the night. For fantasies morph into shackles at dawn's breaking light. Sequestered in make-believe; love has brought you to your knees. But within dreams, you get to be with whomever you please.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/13/2018 3:00:00 PM
Love the imagery of these two lines "Sequestered within your heart love has brought you to your knees." Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/15/2016 9:19:00 PM
What a true description of this "ailment"! Been there, done that....I feel your pain. Wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:31:00 AM
Wow...quite real and relevant to me..quite the amazing description of how unrequited love feels.it it made me cry to be honest..a7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/23/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Joel, you defiantly know how to create a smile, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2015 12:20:00 AM
EMILE, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 9:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned and oh, so true...that just sums it all up, so well.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 10:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, I remain in your debt. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 3:11:00 PM
Im working on a poem about with the same gist..hope it comes even close to being as good as yours..If you haven't entered this is the Justice Love contest you should...BG
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Barbara, what a friendly thing to say...I will enter this poem as you have suggested. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 2:28:00 PM
Oh Emile the imagery is wonderful but oh so sad - I especially adore the moth to the flame stanza -It's hard to move on when your heart has been broken and to eventually move on but I guess its something we have all overcome at some stage in our life :-( Hugs Jan xx. its a 7 from me:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I bask in your praise. Emile.
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