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Short Poetry Contest ~ Sponsor: Dilly Dally

July 21, 2023

~ Mortality ordained ~

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/24/2023 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/23/2023 11:59:00 PM

Stark warning Lin - well written

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2023 10:53:00 AM

WoW! Lin, You say much in a few words.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2023 8:16:00 AM

short and sweet Lin! hugs jan xx

Bill Baker

Date: 7/21/2023 9:52:00 PM

Powerful Elegy, Lin, and nice illustration above. Message received. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2023 3:12:00 AM

Morning, Bill. Thanks for the comment and your smile.

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/21/2023 3:07:00 PM

Boy that apple looks good Lin, temptation personified, I wonder if most people are like me and keep their eyes on the apple when eating it, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2023 6:28:00 PM

I’ve never checked out an apple while eating but that’s a good idea. The thought of biting into a worm is not appetizing. Thanks, David.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/21/2023 2:16:00 PM

A creative/short write. I enjoyed it and love your picture. I also did this one. Really makes one think about each word. Good Luck... Have a blessed weekend.....................

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2023 6:25:00 PM

I’m delighted you enjoyed it, Paula. Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/21/2023 1:25:00 PM

Wow! Very good, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2023 6:25:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Kim.

Chris Green

Date: 7/21/2023 9:09:00 AM

I'd call that shirt for sure. : ) Best wishes in the contest

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2023 9:52:00 AM

I read you. I do it ofen.

Chris Green
Date: 7/21/2023 9:35:00 AM

And I just noticed I wrote "shirt poem" . That'll teach me to check before exiting.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2023 9:21:00 AM

Mornin' Chris. Mighty good to see ya and thanks for the right nice comment. I'm much obliged for your best wishes. Ok, enough drawl... I hope you're well and happy.