Follow the Smile

I watch the smile grow Across your lips, up your cheeks And into your eyes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2013 8:24:00 AM

Yes, I have not even seen these back here from the 17th. This is beautiful.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/18/2013 12:13:00 PM

This is a sentimentally beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and grandiose poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, a harmonious poem, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/18/2013 10:47:00 PM

Hello my friend, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/18/2013 5:12:00 AM

Lovely ......Seren

Rollo West
Date: 1/18/2013 10:48:00 PM

Hi Seren, thank you so much for your great comment. Rollo