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Flutes of Autumn

On the little long dying cherry tree the flutes of autumn play on a beautiful august day that sees its ending a long way away. The russet vies with Lincoln green to be seen to play the more appealing tune. Oh why when these flutes turn their colourful tunes it sounds a haunting beauty yet when we compete our autumn tunes better to block all ears unless we play the songs of loving tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/25/2014 4:17:00 PM
Very descriptive work with some good metaphors..I am glad that I chose this one today to read..Sara
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Peter Dorr
Date: 11/30/2014 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I like autumn which so attractive in Europe and North American and I like the 'Americanism' 'Fall' for the season too. Best wishes, Peter.
Date: 8/12/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Ram, but it doesn't really rhyme, but what the heck!
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Date: 8/5/2014 9:39:00 AM
Autumn comes alive in your words with its music, Peter.
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