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Fleeting Freedom

The cool breath of fall Frees the leaves from their prison Floating to their death

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 4:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Larry in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:44:00 PM

nice one , congrats on your HM in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:19:00 AM

From prison to death. Bleak, just like the coming winter! Good one, Larry and congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Larry

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:56:00 PM

Congrats, Larry. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:19:00 PM

Congrats Larry on your HM in Rick's contest ...a lovely poem and honor to enjoy tonight ..with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2010 3:09:00 AM

You are an expert in writing haiku. Larry. It is your cup of teA

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/16/2010 6:49:00 PM

Got my rake ready. Awesome Haiku. Ralph

Jamecia Buggs

Date: 8/16/2010 6:42:00 PM

This is one the best haiku I've ever read,it sends chillis down my spine.This is very beautifully wirtten...............wow

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2010 6:25:00 PM

I like the personification you give the season, Larry. Very beautifully written haiku! Love, Carolyn