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In restless dreams I sail the night on celestial seas starlight guiding my way along an uncharted course exploring constellations with consummate expertise but it's a secret, so I'll never reveal my tour de force Some nights I fly around the moon on diaphanous wings landing while she sings to me, a soft lullaby in the night then journey on my quest for love, around Saturn's rings to find a handsome dreamer, a gallant winged bedight I've yet to find the seraphic one to ignite my stellar flare My dreams may only fill a scrapbook of elegiac memoirs unless I find a Luna river whose elixir leads me to love's lair Until then I'll be drinking from the moon and tasting the stars Savoring the flavor of starlight before waking from my dream Thirst quenched in the mystical waters after the moon's eclipse Hoping to find a lover at my side, seductive eyes all agleam whispering words of love to me before surrendering my lips

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/5/2018 4:33:00 AM

Your poem is filled with with universal enchantment Lin. I love it and also the lovely picture that enhances its beauty. : )

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/28/2018 10:50:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your work Lin, I'm never disappointed...

Lin Lane
Date: 3/29/2018 9:35:00 AM

How very kind of you to feel this way, Charlie. I'm honored by your visit and gentle remarks.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/23/2018 1:47:00 AM

Oh, the moon and celestial objects, romance, love, capricious intent and whimsy - all my favorite muses rolled into one - I LOVE this, and must add to my favs - what a gorgeous and witty work of ethereal joy!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/28/2018 7:36:00 AM

Your glowing comments are graciously given and accepted. Thank you so much, Greg.

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/16/2018 7:56:00 PM

You raise the heights of romance in this magnificently crafted poem my friend. So many exceptional verses.. "Until then I'll be drinking from the moon and tasting the stars" A fav and a pleasure to read such fine poetry!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/19/2018 2:37:00 PM

Thank you most sincerely, Robert.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2018 2:52:00 PM

what wonderful romantic imagery Lin an absolute delight to read, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you for your ever gracious remarks, Jan.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/15/2018 2:48:00 PM

I'm loving this Lin. Glad I peeked in today

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2018 3:19:00 PM

You may peek in any time, Tim. Thank you.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/15/2018 2:33:00 PM

Such a beautiful, romantic image in your wonderful poem, Lin I hope you found your lover !!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2018 3:19:00 PM

I'm appreciative of your well wishes and your compliments, Mike. If I were looking for a lover I'd be disappointed. ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Your dream is so romantic, beautifully crafted Lin :) - My favorite line : ..." I'll be drinking from the moon and tasting the stars " - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the sweetness of your comments, A L.