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Finish This Verse

Roses are red, Violets are blue, Baby, I'm the best thing That's ever happened to you. 3/12/12 for Susan Burch's Finish This Verse contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2012 6:02:00 PM

This one is VERY GOOD,Kim. I like how you made it YOU were the best,not him. haha. Congrats belatedly.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/19/2012 7:41:00 PM

Congarst Kim on your win.Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 12:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2012 1:56:00 PM

cxongrats Kim on a splendid ending for finish the verse.. will have to make my hubby read this one luv.. great win..enjoy..

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/18/2012 12:15:00 PM

Bahahahaha!!!! I like this--I'm still laughing...Kim,Congratulations on your win! Big Hugggss~Deb~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/18/2012 12:01:00 PM

Great finish there Kim, nice, congratulations xx

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/18/2012 10:17:00 AM

Kim, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2012 12:33:00 AM

NOw THAT is the way to tell him!!! I like this confident one.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/13/2012 3:07:00 PM

LOL, enjoyed this one, Kim

Erich Goller

Date: 3/12/2012 9:48:00 PM

a lovely romantic poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Judy Ball

Date: 3/12/2012 3:00:00 PM

Great verse Kim. Let him know you know. God Bless, ;) JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2012 2:43:00 PM

Well done Kim (I have one to) - oxox Anne-Lise