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Find Me Then

Find me then, when gilded ruby sky Adorns mauve twilight on canvas pink Pleasing ardor of magenta dreams Tinting smiles in brushstrokes tangerine; Find me then, when ocean's blue bosom Scintillates waves' vermilion passions As sun's orange glow folds in embrace Caressing kiss of love --find me then. June 11, 2020 Placed 3rd: Repeat the phrase poetry contest Nine syllables per line (hommanysyllables.com) Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Robertina B.

Date: 7/11/2020 10:55:00 AM

Absolutely enjoyed your exquisite verse, Vijay.. I felt as if i could literally melt in your verse! So splendid and breathtaking, my friend.. Imagery is excellent! Many blessings..

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/28/2020 12:36:00 PM

Hello Vijay, i can see the sunset in your poem. So beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:32:00 AM

Thank you Darlene--much appreciate.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2020 1:12:00 PM

A wonderful write in every way Vijay, I thought I commented on this one already, sorry for the late comment but it's even better second read!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thank you John for your visit and much valued comments--much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/21/2020 5:23:00 PM

Vijay, Love this poem! Each and every word, each and every image is stunning! In my faves. Congratulations on the placement! Mala

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 6/18/2020 9:34:00 AM

Paintbrush of artist tying colors of flowers and emotions in a fall bouquet of love! Congratulations. So well done!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM

Much appreciate Frances--many thanks.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 3:25:00 PM

Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

DM Babbit

Date: 6/15/2020 11:51:00 AM

Must say, glad I found your poetry.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM

Much appreciate, DM--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/13/2020 7:25:00 PM

Your imagery in this one is simply breathtaking! "Ruby sky", "mauve twilight", "magenta dreams", "vermilion passions"...this is incredibly full of enchanting emotions. Congratulations on your win Vijay. This is a a fave for me :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM

Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 7:15:00 PM

a cornucopia of delightful colors and images. Congrats, Vijay. Wasn't that a great theme?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2020 1:00:00 PM

you certainly painted a beautiful portrait, vijay... heartfelt congrats on garnering a medal in my contest... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:33:00 PM

So very kind of you Nette--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2020 12:38:00 PM

Beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/13/2020 8:50:00 AM

Remarkably well-done, Vijay:-) Thorough enjoyment! Congratulations on your fine win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Edward--much appreciate the kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/12/2020 9:13:00 PM

Oh my!!! You always paint such breathtaking images with your words. Again, I am in complete awe. I could wrap these beautiful colors around me. :) And linger. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM

Always a joy to read your comments--many thanks Brandy--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2020 7:51:00 PM

Who could not love this beautiful poem? Well done Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Heidi--much appreciate--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2020 1:07:00 PM

I would love to "find you" when you are surrounded by nature's beauty, Vijay. Your poem has a magical feel to it. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 3:59:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.