Fear

fear, creeping towards us, it's venom deadly, such a relentless foe.

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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/12/2015 4:08:00 AM

How are you David? Got some time today and decided to treat myself to another of your old posts. I have certainly felt fear's presence many times, You have the gift of putting into words the emotive description of an abstract, Miss your visits to my own page. Hope you are okay and that you're just busy. Kim

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/6/2015 4:57:00 PM

What an interesting shape to put your Haiku in David. Can't stand snakes or spiders for that matter. Very much enjoyed. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 11:56:00 PM

DAVID, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2014 9:22:00 PM

think I will try to catch up on some of your older things! This one sure is the definition of fear. It is relentless!!!

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 12/19/2014 3:50:00 PM

David, I am with gratitude you took time to read and uplift with your comment, Muchitimas gracias. Your haiku "Fear" it grabbed my attention, as I have had to reckon with the downside of it. I like the way you spaced your 575, letting them creep? wonderful thought. Fear dissolved when I looked it in the eye, poked it and shimmied on by. Happy holidays.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/22/2014 11:45:00 AM

It is a relentless foe. Haiku does not have any capital letters and no period. You have good ideas but for a better idea of haiku go to a site called graceguts It is about haiku. For three lines I still struggle with this form myself. line one is --when-line 2 is --where-- and line 3 is--what-. I have trouble as haiku shows no emotion in it's lines. I hope this helps you as it took someone a long time to tell me I was not doing it correctly. love phyl

David Meade
Date: 10/22/2014 2:10:00 PM

Thank-you for your valuable feedback -- I am off to graceguts to learn more about haiku. Most of all, thank-you for taking time for me -- it is an awesome gift. All the best. ddm

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/19/2014 9:17:00 PM

If no fear I don't know this world where?Nice poem.

David Meade
Date: 10/19/2014 9:24:00 PM

Fear is good for making sure we are tracking but must not be put in charge. Life strong and free.