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Falling Thoughts

The snow lightly fell bringing thoughts with gravity Windy, some areas hard to see Wishes remain, things will go well I felt the soft, cold touch on my skin with gusting air Hoping things will be fair not wanting to ask for too much Heidi Sands 2/5/25 (C)opyright

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David Crandall

Date: 2/9/2025 4:49:00 PM

Interesting to think of snow bringing thoughts with it. I haven't seen too much snow here in California. Nice poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/9/2025 4:51:00 PM

Thank you David. We got quire a bit more lastnight. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2025 2:15:00 AM

- We had a lot of snow the first weeks of January and cold winds... - The temperature turned... and everything disappeared in a day - Have a lovely weekend, Heidi... stay warm :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/8/2025 4:49:00 AM

It sounds like you had some nice warmer weather come about. I hope you have a nice weekend too. Thank you. Hugs. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/6/2025 10:17:00 PM

Brrr...it's cold. No snow in Malta but the air is damp. Maybe snow is better.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/7/2025 5:03:00 AM

It has been very cold here, especially with the wind chill. Hopefully, it gets less damp there. Thank you :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/6/2025 2:59:00 PM

Submitted 2/6/25