Falling

falling petals of apple blossoms rain on my parade AP: 2nd place 2022 Posted on April 11, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2019 12:49:00 AM

Line, your haiku compete with themselves today, but they are all in a class of their own.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2019 6:15:00 PM

the blossom is falling like confetti here Line oh so pretty:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2019 6:35:00 PM

Awesome, Jan. Here it is still falling SNOW !!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/11/2019 5:31:00 PM

But so pretty while they last....

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2019 6:36:00 PM

Can't wait. I'm a little premature.