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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:35:00 PM

Congrats on your sweet senryu going thru round one of finals.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Annalise. Love Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2011 3:32:00 PM

LOL the last line is SO RIGHT-ON/ Congrad's your verse through round 1 of the sites International Contest! Light & Love

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/7/2011 9:51:00 AM

so scent without sense how immense still in the race although nut mad and dense, all the best Audrey.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:02:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 12/18/2010 11:10:00 AM

This is why I have nut trees growing in my back yard. Love this write. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 12/14/2010 6:20:00 PM

Hi Audrey.Ah! poor thing,lost his nuts.Gone to all that trouble and now doesn't know where they are.Reminds me of someone else I know.The curse of the ageing process-memory loss.I love your fun Haiku.A good one ,not only humorous but clever.Makes you wonder does it hit the animal kingdom or is it only us humans that it renders into amnesiac idiots, trying to laugh it off as a 'senior moment?As though calling it that gives it a sense of dignity.!Thanks for the laugh and empathy?.Love June

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/14/2010 7:21:00 AM

So fun... beautiful imagery! Congrats on your feature Audrey...wishing you many more to come...Lay

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 3:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Audrey. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 12/13/2010 3:33:00 PM

Yes! I see the little guys hunting in the snow each morning what they've buried last summer. Congrats on this fine Haiku being selected. Love, dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/12/2010 5:00:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today my friend with luv...

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/28/2010 5:14:00 PM

gray squirrels. what a nice image for fall. . hope you are well, Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/28/2010 3:03:00 PM

I recently sold an article about squirrels. The little animals must prepare for the harsh winter as you say so well in your haiku. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

John Rhinem

Date: 9/28/2010 2:46:00 PM

Smile ~ I have to grab a bite real quick & yet, I shall return to visit "Your Beauty" again before this day is through my dear &, "Very Pretty Poe Wrapped Within, 'A Very Lovely Message I Believe!!!'" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to 'Your Beauty Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Evening 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey,' Amid 'The Sweetened Treasures Troves of, Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/28/2010 2:34:00 PM

Smile ~ Actually speaking of those tiny little cute creations called squirrels did "Your Beauty" know that, their mothers carry their babies from tree to tree amid their mouths even when, their babies are as big as they are; so funny but so very lovely & cute ~ Isn't "Creation" a vast & endless sea of wonderous fascination & beauty ~ "Praise 'God, The Father of Light!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/28/2010 2:28:00 PM

Smile ~ I hope that "Your Beautiful Beauty 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey" had a hopeful chuckle with another one of my lovingly light-hearted stabs upon humor "My 'Dear Lovely Lady!!!'" ~ And, "Thank You 'Beautiful Audrey'" for "Your Treasures" kind & somewhat intriguing yet beautiful com this early afternoon dear my lady &, I hope that "Your Magnificent Splendours" are doing absolutely wonderfully this day where "Your Beauty" does shine ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/28/2010 2:17:00 PM

Smile ~ Well, I have found through a vast & extensive study upon the squirrels themselves that although, they may often forget the exact location of those treasures buried shallow in the ground beneath say, the fall foliage, they are Always keenly & astutely aware of, if not their own caches jewels locals well then, that of their brother or sisters, fall festivities reapings amid rough terrained verdantly flourished vicinities ~ Smile ~ ....Cont:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/27/2010 1:19:00 PM

Squirrels are real hoarders, Audrey. Somehow they seem to make it through winter with the nuts they set aside all fall. Best wishes for success in Andrea's contest! Love, Carolyn