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Faith Aureate Soul

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Written: January 17, 2024 _________________________________ Delphic melodies on elysian breeze lustral chorales in amber from spiritual chronicles, seven seas mingle in tandem in abyss quietness of an arcane heart, sky spreads sapphire salacity in wispy turquoise of unfathomable horizon. In inked echoes of aureate verse, endured true self, mystic, Beset by a harsh problem? it's time to shine gather yourself, and overcome aptly, striving to draft words of faith that convey emotions, feeling utterly inept. Yet, it is our lambent spur  that compels us to attempt despite various paths they all lead back toward my heart, includes everything... everything I foresee is my mirror, everything I foresee is my love... Thrums of orphic cymbals in choral melody crimson wings beat in furious rhapsody! In sways of swirling lilts you glide on tendrils of iridescent waves embracing truth  we're all fallible, It's harsh to have a humane life, still, God is in our midst. we merely crave faith that entails conviction, Azulene swirls of glyphic whirl, blazing!  Conga drums in sibylline upswell, you waltz to a claret trance on wisps of tender melody! One can be driven to destructiveness, illness,  or failure by fear but faith is a stronger force, that can push itself into your mind and urge you to accomplish embrace power of prayer, unexpected metamorphosis may transpire in the aftermath; beseech Him for abettance. 9th place contest winner

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Date: 2/4/2024 5:10:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your ethereal, real, spiritual, dramatic, dynamic imageries thrill my heart, soul and imagination. Every verse is beautiful but I was especially struck by "It's harsh to have a humane life,/still, God is in our midst." So deep, thought-provoking and inspiring. Your brilliant poetic pen is as profound as it is artistic. Congrats for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/19/2024 11:34:00 AM
The Lord is over all Sotto.. Thank you for The reflection offered here.)
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Date: 1/19/2024 7:49:00 AM
- So wonderfully beautifully described - "sky spreads sapphire salacity in wispy turquoise of unfathomable horizon"... it is truly a tender melody ... - I admire your talent my friend :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:32:00 PM
I love how your poem opens with an enchanting description of nature, invoking Delphic melodies and elysian breezes, setting a mystical tone. The lustral chorales in amber evoke a sense of purity and spiritual resonance, drawing the reader into a world of divine connections... wonderful weaving of words and such vivid imagery..
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Date: 1/18/2024 7:16:00 AM
So very emotive, my friend. Words woven with feelings resonate throughout, Lasaad. I like the turn to prayers in the ending.
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Date: 1/18/2024 2:30:00 AM
God is in our midst. Oh if were possible that he inspires us to have compassion.
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