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Eye of the Storm

Someone's at the door Irma, she's not welcome here Furious cyclops. Composed on 6th September 2017.

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Date: 10/8/2017 8:00:00 PM
An excellent haiku Roy. Love the last line especially. Well done and enjoyed!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/10/2017 4:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan. :))
Date: 9/14/2017 3:17:00 AM
- Irma is not welcome anywhere ... she's evil ! - Well done, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2017 4:50:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Anne-Lise, I can't imagine how horrific and devastating this disaster has affected the poor residents, absolutely awful.
Date: 9/6/2017 5:57:00 PM
Way to do the theme if this is for that hurricane contest. It's scary as heck!!
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Date: 9/7/2017 4:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, totally agree I feel so sorry for those poor people affected by this awful disaster. Thanks again for your support. :)
Date: 9/6/2017 1:07:00 PM
I agree Roy. This one is a bad one. Very concerning.
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:03:00 PM
Hi Heidi, I have only experienced winds of 55 mph so can't even imagine what this would be like, horrendous.
Date: 9/6/2017 5:34:00 AM
So true Roy! Good one.
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Date: 9/6/2017 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi, this sounds like a horrific disaster.
Date: 9/6/2017 5:18:00 AM
Lovely depiction-- a timely emotion--well done, Roy!
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/6/2017 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, so many natural disasters on Earth but this sounds really bad.

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