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Exit Ramp

The exit ramp looms large just up ahead, though still an unknown distance ‘round the bend, a terminus of sorts. Perhaps a point from which to send us out of time constraints, into the now, the means by which remain unknown, just how exactly, this all ends. To fret, a waste, ’tis said, so I shall trust instead. And yet, this ideation blooms within my mind, a frequent fascination that with other thoughts, comports. If only now, is there no then, and sequencing of time, thus obsolete, as all arrive en mass, surprised to meet? The world I know is flat; my finitude stretched thin, constrained to trust again.
————— Another fun one, a Mistress Bradstreet stanza: 10a-10b-6c-8b-10d-10d-6b-12a This one comes from a notion from reading Matthew 25, in the Last Judgment. All would have died at different times, but on that day, all were surprised, hence the idea of different departures, all arriving at now. ---------- This will be the third time I've added sponsor info. I do not know what is happening here... for the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 22 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney written on 10/13/22

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Date: 12/17/2022 4:04:00 AM
Though we depart at different times, we all enmasse come together once more at the same time moving out of time constraints. Profound thoughts ! Congratulations on your great win Jeff !
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:44:00 AM
Great use of metaphor Jeff and travel images, "terminus," "exit ramp," "round the bend.". So creative and thought provoking all at once! Congratulations. Blessings on your journey!
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Date: 12/15/2022 8:39:00 AM
I agree with Mark's assessment. This is very thought provoking.. Big congrats on a job well done.
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Date: 12/14/2022 12:33:00 PM
Very thought-provoking, Jeff. When I first read the poem before knowing your inspiration, I understood the first stanza as relating to growing old and dying. There's not enough room here for me to explain my thoughts about the second stanza. My point? As with any work of art, you have both the artist's and the viewer's perspectives. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 22 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 23 has begun.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 12/14/2022 2:59:00 PM
I'd love to hear your thoughts on the second stanza (or, rather, the idea behind it) sometime. I do like that we read something and get a totally different read, based on our own experiences, from the writer. Thanks again for hosting the contest!
Date: 10/13/2022 7:01:00 PM
Your musings are amusing, defusing, occasionally confusing -- but mostly infusing me with ?????? Now that's the question
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Date: 10/13/2022 6:16:00 PM
Time is such a fascinating construct. I imagine that from the perspective of infinity (in which time does not exist) our slow-motion dream is a speck of dust in the galaxy. Beginning and end together. One whole holograph seen in its entirety. And yet to us it drags on moment to moment... It's too much for my human mind. Love your perspective on it! :-)
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/14/2022 7:50:00 AM
We are all our own flavor of crazy... that's what makes us beautiful!!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/14/2022 7:36:00 AM
This may seem somewhat crazy, but I've been intrigued by the parable of the Final Judgment in Matthew 25. Both the sheep and the goats are surprised, from which I take it they didn't know. Which led to the idea that they just arrived, but supposedly, they all died at different times. Pure musing on my part, of course, but intriguing, nonetheless.
Date: 10/13/2022 9:06:00 AM
Oh, wow, this is so cleverly composed, Jeff. You do know that taking a wrong exit in some cities like Chicago can be like a death penalty! I liked this. It does seem a bit complicated, though. I'm a simple guy!
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