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If Peter Piper picked a pack of pickled peppers, would you care? Would the peck be put in a glass jar? What if he dropped a hair in there? And, if Miss Muffet sat on her tuffet digging and found the jar that Piper had hidden in the muck, along side the skull of Cro-Magnon man? “Ahhh, NO we’ve found the hip girdle and he’s a she!” Well, ole Pipper’s pecker would have gone to the pie in the sky and Miss Muffet’s tuffet would have gone to compost; So, how would the archeologist know for sure? " Why the HIP, you hafta have hips, miles and miles and mile of hips… Baby you can be a hero of course just put that ‘orse behind the cart!” Heart, well it’s left the building too. “Geeezzz it was just a pump whatcha want from a pump?” Thump, thump, from the bump, bump, then ya hump, hump, and my goodness, we’re back to Peter Piper and his pecker? “NO, no, his peck of pickles and Muffet’s missin’ tuffet? Well, I say the stars, yes the stars, show the way, the celestial meaning of the id, the I, the you, the ego too, and love “Ahhhhhh love the excuse for it all!” The pickles, the muffins, the tuffet, the bumping the humpin’ The free for all of we!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/12/2013 12:04:00 PM
awesome~SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2013 6:32:00 PM
cingrats on your win.....best wishes
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Date: 1/11/2013 4:49:00 PM
Very clever and entertaining, for me one of the best. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/10/2013 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your tongue twisting win, Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:55:00 PM
Debbie, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:42:00 PM
haha got it going here didn;t you? Congratulations to you Deborah
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest. :) Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:46:00 PM
Excuses, never ending! Congratulations on your win in the contest, Deb. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:48:00 AM
I tried reading this one aloud and it made me laugh even harder, Deb. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:55:00 AM
"Excuses, Excuses A lot of them going around Debbie!" A tongue twister for sure! Smile! "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this nice win in the contest, Debbie
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in John's contest with these lovely words so poignant.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday TEACH.. with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 10:04:00 AM
Suggestions of a bit of precept intermingled within a concepted view, when read from the precept view , Debbie. Thanks for supporting my contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/21/2010 8:55:00 PM
Another awesome write, Deb. This was really FREE. I take it that it's for john's contest?
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Date: 9/21/2010 12:15:00 PM
Whatever you were drinking when you wrote this delight.......can I have some, please?? Like the woman tells the waitress in "When Harry Met Sally"...."I'll have what she's having"......if it's this much fun!!!
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:20:00 AM
the more i read this, the more i enjoy it. very well done. thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/21/2010 6:54:00 AM
It's mostly stream of consciousness writing. There is a bread crumb trail through the world thing is does have a unifiying them LOL pickles, muffin/tuffits/love/life/repeat!
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:31:00 PM
This is utter chaos and brilliance! I have not the creativity to conjure forth such a thing as this! Well done.
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Date: 9/20/2010 5:48:00 PM
No one could do this better than you Deborah, just so much fun to read.. and thanks for commenting on my zoo poem, it is indeed a wonderful memory not just of the animals but of me and my father together~~
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Date: 9/20/2010 5:29:00 PM
LOL got my head spinning in this captivating fun fun poem..thanks for sharing....Michael
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:35:00 PM
Oh yes this is awesome! Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:11:00 PM
This is a mind twisters as well as a tongue twister, Deborah! Mercy, Miss Muffet better guard her tuffets a bit better. What a fun poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/20/2010 2:01:00 PM
lol, well this sure got me snickering--Peter Piper and Miss Muffet! this was so much fun to read--and hmm read your comments in my sweetheart write-- me--naughty? Ahaha, maybe it's just you, whatever do you mean ;)?? thanks btw-- hopefully I can bring Alice to the moon within the week :D -- nikko :)
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