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Everyone Needs Someone, Sometime

Taunted by luxury, a life of ease. I struggled to utter the words, “sir, please”? I’d become distraught by my circumstance. I saw no way alone; I could advance. I knew the time in my life had now come, To lose my ego, ask help from someone. With all my money, I’d still have to ask, Or accept my failure at this one task. With money and self my only allies, Having no solution was a surprise. Sometimes our dreams may require another, Like a friend, stranger, sister, or brother. With my deepest desire, I long to teach. Without another, it’s out of my reach.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2023 12:47:00 PM

Yes, for sure we cannot teach if not wants to learn. LOL..I like this one which has good rhyme, rhythm, and flow. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 5:12:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my poetry, Sara. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Jim Slaughter

Date: 9/5/2023 11:18:00 AM

One of the hardest things to do...sometimes...is ask for help. Is the reluctance out of a sense of pride or...failure...? So fortunate are we who do have people in our lives we can turn to in troubled times. And hopefully we'll also be there when/if someone should need us. A great piece, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you for the mindful comment, Jim. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/5/2023 8:06:00 AM

My good friend, thus is an important creation. As it teaches that despair can be conquered and a healthy life resumed, with happiness within it. A fav my friend. God bless you.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 5:10:00 PM

Thank you for the mindful comment, Robert, for the FAV. Yeah! God always provides a way to overcome any obstacle placed in one's way. Have a blessed week, my dear friend. Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/5/2023 3:24:00 AM

Hello Bill. Good Morning. How true. There are many times we can not do it alone and we need help. Your words are true. If and when we come to terms to this fact we will be happier. You leave us with a message. May today be a great day. Peace and Blessings now and always to you and Sara. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 6:26:00 AM

I'm getting to that point more often now. lol Thanks for the kind comments on my poetry, Lisa. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Deb M

Date: 9/4/2023 11:00:00 PM

We humans need others at times in life and to varying degrees… some more than others. Asking for help doesn't come easy for some with riches or not….pride….but thats another poem right there for you Bill haha!! Enjoyed….Debx

Bill Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 6:24:00 AM

Thanks for the prompt, Deb, I may write one on pride. :-) Have a pleasant day my friend. Hugs, Bill

The Situation

Date: 9/4/2023 9:47:00 AM

Money is one thing but love is another. Robin williams comes to mind surely he had no money problems but commited suicide. I love him, we all did, Look around your loved. and if arms are what you need , adopt them and hug them.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2023 3:46:00 PM

I agree, TS, Robin Williams was a gift actor / entertainer. One of my favorites. Thanks for the comments my friend. Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/4/2023 6:55:00 AM

Wise words. Money is a tool but a poor substitute for a meaningful relationship. Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem. Do drop by again.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2023 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for a first visit to my poetry, Richard. I appreciate your visits to Sara's porty and to mine. I'll be checking in and reading your poetry, and hopefully you'll do the same. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 9/3/2023 12:18:00 AM

Man cannot live in isolation. He needs help from others to live and grow. However rich one may be, a person has to receive help from another. This need for interdependance is more for human beings than for most other species of life. From infancy to old age, till one dies, he has to depend on others! This truth is beautifully and powerfully expounded in your poem.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2023 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa, for the insightful comments, my dear friend. I used to think I could do anything I put my mind too, and thought I'd just do it myself when others tried to help and didn't do things up to the standards I wanted; but then God set me straight and taught me that it's not always about me and how I want things done, sometimes it to allow others to feel the joy of helping. I'm more sensitive now and try to let others help me if they want to. I'd rather do something together than by myself. It's nice to help and be helped. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 9/2/2023 7:15:00 PM

A brilliant sonnet, loving the cadence of your word weaving here. Sometimes evn with all the money etc, we might need to ask for help, and its not easy for some to ask for help as they were taught from a very tender age, not to ask, but to accept , and figure things on their own.having to ask others can be challenging for some, but with time and practice and courage, we can, as like you’ve said everyone deserves and needs someone at some point, a friend,sibling etc. Such profound wisdom depicted

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2023 5:56:00 PM

Thank you for the visit and comments, Ink, your thoughts are helpful to me. Have a great week! Bill

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/2/2023 5:45:00 PM

Hi, Bill! Truth! Life takes, needs, requires others! I often ponder God’s creating us for some fellowship — as thinking, choosing, imaginative souls able to pray, for communion, to know & accept His greatest creation:LOVE, to give that to us & for us to give to Him& all others.the must in the need for others no matter the role or vocation.Marvelous pen

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2023 5:59:00 PM

Thanks, Sally, for your thoughts on my poetry. I too believe we are given opportunities to help others and to be helped ourselves in our time of need. God works through people; His Love flows through us to those that are in need. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/2/2023 2:10:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your write. "Wonderful" Have a great day/weekend...............

Bill Baker
Date: 9/2/2023 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Paula. Have a pleasant dat, my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/2/2023 5:05:00 AM

A profound message my friend, No we can't let our ego call the shots--it is true, every one needs someone some times.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/2/2023 9:01:00 AM

I certainly do. Thanks for the comment, Vijay. Bill