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Evanescing Echoes

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I am an echo of time A fleeting moment about to end Where lost horizons mime And fading dreams defend Like a decaying dust A massless mold with endeavor Like a restless rust A nuance within the never I fall into existence Behold my name I am the path of least resistance Searching for where I came Let me jump into the abyss Soon you will forget who I am Will you truly miss? That I was a hologram! ________________________________ July.15.2020 Last poetry contest... Sponsored by~ Silent One Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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P.M. Richter

Date: 6/2/2023 12:38:00 PM

A beautiful poet.

Constance La France

Date: 5/30/2023 1:58:00 PM

Winged Warrior, oh how you are missed, I miss you every day, rest in peace dear poetic friend, gone but not forgotten !

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 4/9/2021 11:36:00 AM

never forgotten, always near

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/11/2020 3:23:00 PM

This poem is one of your best and it will keep the essence of you forever alive in my memories of what a loving soul you were. I just found out about your transition into the heavenly realm today and you will be sorely missed by so many here at the Soup including me. Prayers and blessings to your family and friends. Aloha ‘Oe my dear poet. xxoo Connie

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/20/2020 8:51:00 AM

BUT YOU ARE NOT A HOLOGRAM, EVEN THOUGH THIS IS A BRILLIANT POEM. HOWEVER EVEN IF YOU WERE A HOLOGRAM, YES i WOULD REMEMBER YOU FOR YOU WILL ALWAYS BE A POET WHO STANDS OUT ON SOUP - CONGRATULATIONS WINGED WARRIOR I APPLAUD YOU. BLESSINGS AND HUGS, JENNIFER.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 11:23:00 AM

As I read this muse I wanted to say 'Here comes the brilliance of an outstanding poet with the mastery of enchanting emotions' and that describes your words WW. Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2020 4:32:00 PM

^WW^, congratulations on your win with these beautiful poem. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2020 5:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 7/26/2020 2:36:00 AM

We are all echoes of time my friend... profound poetry... Hope you are well and behaving.. How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 3:35:00 AM

"I am the path of least resistance Searching for where I came" - this captured me and the last line captivated me. This poem I will remember maybe always Winged Warrior.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2020 12:55:00 PM

Really fun! Love it, my friend! I went to a hologram museum when I was in high school.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2020 4:56:00 PM

wow, I LOVE where you took that theme. I have no clue how to do such a poem as he asked for. Love this.

Sand Blown

Date: 7/15/2020 1:59:00 PM

...'an echo...a fleeting moment...massless ...a nuance...hologram...of least resistance'....wowza....thought forms all... ....stan sand

John Watt

Date: 7/15/2020 1:05:00 PM

Wingman, always a pleasure to see your deep thoughts, alliterative word pairings, and evocative images. Well done sir Wingster, and GL in the contest ~ JW

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/15/2020 12:57:00 PM

Wow, so cool WW. Well done :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/15/2020 8:43:00 AM

And a really good hologram...it can be very painful while alive...I enjoyed it...All the best

James Long

Date: 7/15/2020 8:18:00 AM

What could be more decadent, than to give fragrant homage to a hologram, lol? very clever, lol. love this!