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The morning's tide of light filters through low-hanging branches outside the window entering a room to spread across wrinkled skin covered in brown blotches on the arms of an old man lying in a bed of shadows the world inside his window is dim-lit and solemn the world outside his window is bright and filled with life children loudly laughing, birds chirping both bring a sense of peace and reflection and are a nice distraction from the constant flood of memories that drown his mind with too many thoughts of yesterday in the light of dawn comes a stillness he embraces as his days have grown tired and long the day ends as the last light of life becomes frozen

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Date: 1/24/2025 11:43:00 AM
Excellent writing. I bet this scored high.
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:43:00 AM
Frederic, those who read this will indeed momentarily freeze at the end - pondering their own mortality - you've set that stage wonderfully...
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Date: 1/13/2025 2:52:00 PM
Exquisite take on the theme Froid
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Date: 1/13/2025 1:11:00 PM
- A peaceful death, Frederic - Lovely written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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