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My father was from Koenigsberg and a soldier in WWII

'Necklacing' was a form of killing opponenets during Apartheid, by throwing a rubber tyre around neck and arms and then to set the victim alight with petrol

My wife is from Johannesburg

Sudan is roughly equidistant from the Baltic and South Africa's plateu 

Maybe one day...the madness will stop

I descend from Prussian tradition full of frozen rain and fire’s marches Lagoons and marshes my father and history know about the Baltic Sea where amber swims ashore adorned jewelry of hearts and minds now on my lover’s slender neck We share ancestral stories my wife and I of concentration camps and necklaced innocents declared informers in Apartheid set alight with tyres in hateful petrol fumes and Jewish screams to Genesis in the beginning that was the word when ashes upon ashes held all Phoenix’s aground and violence and genocidal anger knows no boundaries In flaked photographs and winter ember days set aside for prayer to the Universe avalanches and winter glows are waiting for the solitude of summer’s dawning when Christmas is just another Sudan desert day abandoned by the God of hellfire Equidistance from Johannesburg and Koenigsberg belies the message flies away from Peace lie lies and old recurrent news in which winter landscapes rarely light the hollow eyed children’s dreams but glowing coal burns brightly when the sky erupts and hallowed bombs fall from heaven and I declare snowflakes and ember a luxury problem in my soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/12/2018 11:14:00 AM
surely, this deserves a win; wonderfully expressed, kai... big congrats!
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kai. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/7/2018 6:54:00 AM
Wow, Kai, a phenomenal heart wrenching eloquent and important penning. Thank you. And warm congratulations for your placement in the contest. xomo
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:17:00 PM
Wow - a high percentage of us can never relate to such hell on earth. It sure brings it home to hear about it from survivors. Congrats on your win and enlightening us by sharing, Kai.
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Date: 1/6/2018 12:51:00 PM
A powerful and sorrowful emotional poem Kai. You delve deeply into the horrors of man against humanity and poetically and poignantly shed your brilliant light. Your write will live with me.. Congratulations on a well deserved second place win with your excellent poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan P.S. truly appreciated the poet's note as well..
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Date: 12/28/2017 12:53:00 PM
wow, Kai, I predict a WIN for this one. I can't seem to write a poem that John ever likes but I feel this is the type he is looking for. A difficult form for me, free verse. But you really did a great job describing this horror in an actual beautiful way. It's beyond my comprehension how badly man can treat another man.
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Date: 12/29/2017 3:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I have the opposite 'problem' to yours. I can pretty much only write free verse and never what others might expect. Too stubborn and set in my poetic ways...Many wishes, Kai
Date: 12/27/2017 6:27:00 AM
Oh Kai...My troubled heart...Would never make sense of what 2-3000 years has failed to resolve...There's something mysterious in the air...A conscious poem...
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