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Written on 6/13/2023

Elegance is the blue of the ocean, ageless paragon's heartbeat in motion. Never calm, but ripples and hoary froth; enigmatic creatures that feel it's wroth. The waves beget in outcome underscores Its thirst for helpless endless sandy shores. Its sheer breast resonates idyllic sound and cool scent of briny seaweed earthbound. It merges to rising blue horizon under shadow clouds do not bedizen. Melting dusk closes with a snug twilight artlessly dissolves completing dark night.

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Date: 6/22/2023 5:24:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and what a lovely image !
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Date: 6/20/2023 7:00:00 PM
This is the place I always want to sojourn my dear poet friend Eve. Congratulations on your first win and this marvelous piece! Thanks for sharing this precious gem. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Love your line, "Elegance is the blue of the ocean." It sure is. Have a great day.............
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Date: 6/20/2023 7:22:00 AM
Ah so soft and serene. A place I'd like to sit and wonder at the universe. Congratulations Eve! :)
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:07:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Eve - (I was late for this one) - hugs
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:27:00 PM
I love the ocean, so this had mega appeal! Beautiful description and imagery made this a soothing read.
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Date: 6/14/2023 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful words creating superb imagery and the Picture just brings it home. Congratulations Eve love it...
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:48:00 AM
Brilliance in couplets, Eve, great pic too:)
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:39:00 AM
Deserves the title. Splendid couplets and wonderful imagery. Hugs.
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