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Who can truly tell all? It is all in time and perspective. I am sure that I’ve forgotten the important things, but who cares, because life is an adventure even when we are in the valley. This bio from my daughter’s perspective is for the bio contest. These are the facts and fiction of my imagination from her.

My mom, she, when I was just three, Would binge operas of soaps, and she Tethered to the television, after her sail Home from Pearl Harbor, would not fail To hug and kiss our butterfly eyes and cheeks. She’d store mama’s milk in freeze for weeks. As we’d march off to church crammed in car, Mom saw her binge as a sin and went as far As to stop watching all three, especially as We’d call them Mama’s Soaps. Her new jazz Is God and the bible, and her church friends. Some have kids our age. On weekends We’d go to explore the beach, but then We all moved and Mama said Amen. My brother, once said, Mom, you’re not old enough to knit and crochet. She said, Then how do we learn to? Rolling eyes…as at some point, she Started writing, took up poetry. Those rolling eyes and whys, recorded for posterity, She reads to us one, two, three - her peculiarity.

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Date: 11/25/2024 7:21:00 PM
Hi Kim. It's nice to read about a family, a mom's version of a daughter's version of a mom, with a brother thrown in.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2024 8:09:00 AM
LOL! Love how you see things! And if you read even deeper, the end shows the 3rd…also indicated with the milk in the freeze. And of course the count is reading more than one, but now I’ll stop interpreting my own poem ;)
Date: 11/23/2024 9:34:00 AM
- A mother with a heart of gold .... who always hugged and kissed their butterfly eyes and cheeks ... lovely poem, with a smile :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2024 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 11/22/2024 1:14:00 PM
Dont feel too bad Kim. I get the rolling eye treatment here as well. Great to read you again. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2024 9:11:00 AM
We are loved somewhere within the rolling eyeball. Our kids have aha moment when they give birth to a new set of rolling eyeballs and that is why the aged have a glint in their eyes and a smile on the lips…lol!
Date: 11/22/2024 10:35:00 AM
You write like a beautiful butterfly, flitting from one idea to another. You're a wonderful poet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2024 9:12:00 AM
That is the kindest thing you have said and you have been so sweet! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 11/22/2024 8:39:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your thoughts Kim, all the best in the contest. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2024 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, John! Mom and her soaps…not to imply that one is bad for watching but I was addicted…lol.
Date: 11/22/2024 4:55:00 AM
I love this, Kim. A great take on the contest. Best wishes... :)
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Date: 11/21/2024 10:43:00 PM
Your kids don't miss a trick Kim, they remember everything. It's often said, be nice to your kids because they get to choose your care home, yikes Tom
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Date: 11/21/2024 5:36:00 PM
Oh, love it, like I love all your poems! The flow was fun and creative - <3 Love and hugs!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2024 5:49:00 PM
You are always so kind. Thank you, Paige!
Date: 11/21/2024 5:17:00 PM
moms are the wisest persons in the world, this is a touching and subtle poem, good luck for the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Yann! :)
Date: 11/21/2024 3:01:00 PM
The 3rd and 4th couplets are so revealing and my favorites! Love the rhymes and best wishes for the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2024 5:14:00 PM
Thank you for telling me what you liked! Hugs ~ Kim

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