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Poetic Form: Nursery Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 July 26
Image: Themed to the song of the; Wheels On The Bus
Tune of: "Wheels On The Bus" I am Humpty Dumpty, longtime pal longtime pal longtime pal I am Humpty Dumpty, longtime pal longtime ago I am Eggy Edgy cracking up cracking up cracking up I am Eggy Edgy cracking up all cracked up I saw Humpty Dumpty, falling down falling down falling down I saw Humpty Dumpty, falling down fall off a wall Now that Humpty Dumpty looks like me look like me look like me Now that Humpty Dumpty looks like me all cracked up Now he's Halfy Deafy he can't hear good he can't hear good he can't hear good Now he's Halfy Deafy he can't hear good till he's healed of wounds Healed up Humpty Dumpty, looking good looking good looking good Healed up Humpty Dumpty, looking good CHEERS the neighborhood I am Eggy Edgy all alone all alone all alone I am Eggy Edgy all alone off to Dumpty's home.

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Date: 8/25/2024 6:28:00 PM
This one so far is my favorite. Thanks for entering that contest.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2024 5:21:00 AM
My thanks, Benjamin, I tend to agree. Aloha William
Date: 8/20/2024 1:53:00 PM
Creative lines in this winning contest entry. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/20/2024 4:05:00 PM
Comforting words silently expressed while busy in San Jose with a beautiful coast with the fam. O spoke too soo
Date: 8/18/2024 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write/story with a great ending.... Say Hi to Humpty Dumpty. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day/week.....................
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2024 1:44:00 PM
Another angelic visit that lifts the heart, thank you Paula. Aloha William
Date: 8/15/2024 5:58:00 PM
Cute idea! Congratulations on your win!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2024 9:34:00 AM
Thanks, Karen. You're Heaven-sent. Aloha William

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