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Early Morning Sunrise

The whispy silver strands that grace the morning sky Are reflectors of the sun at early sunrise It constantly changes the scene with radiant surprise Like a catalogue page of shirts of different tie-dye What a delight, how can I choose just one For each second produces glorious morning delight Filling my being with each new colorful sight The crows, roosters, crickets each sing praise to Son (Quatrain with internal rhyme.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2016 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poems being featured this week, Sara. It's a delightful read...the glory of the morning. Best Wishes, Andrew.
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Date: 7/25/2010 7:41:00 AM
A LOVELY WRIT SARA ! THANKS FOR LIKING SURF RIDER ! BEST WISHES , - Raj Nandy
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:13:00 PM
Beautiful picture you have painted with your words. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:18:00 AM
The morning sunrise is, indeed, a wonderful sight..great poem! Emily
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:20:00 PM
hi Sara :) sent you soupmail.... :) hope I wasn't too confusing with it...
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:54:00 PM
Vibrant lines so vivid Sara.. makes one feel they ae IN the poem itself.. a beautiful creation from u today.. hope u are feeling well ..happy weekend... with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:40:00 AM
The sky is indeed ever changing ~ I just love mornings when all is fresh and new ~ thanks so much for the blog comment on my poetry ~
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:05:00 AM
Best part of the day...fresh, new. That first cup of coffee. Mind cleared. Good write. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:07:00 AM
Nicely written, Sara! During the night and this morning we had rain and with the warm temperatures it is like being in a tropical country today. Enjoy your weekend and thank you for your kind comment on "Water-Meadows"...Gert
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sara. I will be away for the weekend and will be back to read Monday. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:47:00 AM
This sure is a very uplifting poem, Sara! I have to learn how to appreciate the morning light better! Thanks for this write!! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:10:00 AM
Peaceful... Gary.
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:10:00 AM
Sing praise to SON" it's a nice delightlful write.
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:49:00 AM
YES, YES, and the trees lift their arms to God daily in praise. They all know, and some of us do and now I see that you do too! I like:)
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:07:00 AM
....wow Sara...thanks for sharing this wonderful experience...lovely...specially like this line...The whispy silver strands that grace the morning sky
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:00:00 AM
enjoyed reading, morning praise is right!!
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Date: 7/23/2010 4:49:00 AM
Beautiful write Sara, bb Wilma
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Date: 7/23/2010 4:40:00 AM
really beautiful way to start my day! Sara! THANKS!...soupmail, jimbo
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