Dusk

Dusk falls light fading in the half light lives mystery secrets of the dark Secrets of the dark what lurks in deepest night time? scarey shadows loom

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2013 9:15:00 PM

I remember being scared of shadows as I walked home in the dark when I was a kid. Boy could I run fast

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2013 5:58:00 AM

I am not scarey Richard lol seems this caught you up Ty for reading hugs Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/27/2013 6:38:00 PM

love the way you penned this one...it has that mysterious feel as so dusk and night... great write shadow :) hugs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2013 5:56:00 AM

Hi Sandra nice of you to visit me glad you enjoyed the dusk Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2013 6:00:00 PM

dusk is such a cool word to do poems about. Nice one, Shadow. Just realized, your name is in your poem!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2013 5:55:00 AM

hi Andrea yes my name has a habit of popping up lol dusk makes me think of dreamtime Ty for reading

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/27/2013 5:53:00 PM

Dusk to night worded with few words in beautiful haiku. Loved always, my friend, bl

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2013 5:54:00 AM

hi BL dusk is a beautiful time Ty for reading Shadow x smile

Joseph May

Date: 10/27/2013 5:43:00 PM

very nice haiku Shadow....best wishes

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2013 5:52:00 AM

Hi Joseph and Ty so much Shadow x smile hugs