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Drifting Words Into Place

Letters like feathers blow into place... Meanings are scribed in a sentence I embrace... With my fingers I carve into pages made of sand... Like an hour glass of time words fall from my hand... However they look a poetic rhyme shall be free... With just another angle from the mind and soul of me...

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Juniper Lock

Date: 10/14/2012 5:56:00 PM

amazing piece..I am about to read more rom your pen..JuniperL

Juniper Lock
Date: 10/14/2012 5:56:00 PM

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Dia Tucker

Date: 9/18/2012 10:00:00 AM

This was great writing. And the rhyming wasn't cheesy.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/14/2012 4:19:00 AM

wonderful poem, Michael, love the peace this seems to bring when reading.......

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/10/2012 12:39:00 PM

words flow with sentimental touches that lie in the heart, michael... much enjoyed!..:) huggs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/10/2012 11:08:00 AM

Love your poem and it looks so evenly created. Must try and become more creative in my poetry. Thanks for the comments. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:58:00 AM

Michael , have you seen America's Got Talent this year? where this one man creates pictures from sand? They show what he is creating on a big screen and it's stunning. This poem made me think of that.

Cory Long

Date: 9/10/2012 5:38:00 AM

nicely done.. I have really enjoyed your poem.. hugs have a great day cory

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 9/9/2012 10:20:00 PM

feel so good to read your wonderful write ,,,thank you Michael,,,for your great share :) luv SK

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/9/2012 5:08:00 PM

A very fine piece..I like the line about the hour glass the best..but , its all great. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2012 4:25:00 PM

a delicate weave of imagery with words of vivid depictions Michael luv .. always so fascinating to enter your sphere of amazing talent and incredible genius ..JG also very disappointed about boys in blue luv .. only team who lost in division .. oh kudos to Rosanna's Jets .. well wait for week 2 ..xoxo

Aida Melesse

Date: 9/9/2012 2:18:00 PM

what a beautiful way to express your mind's and soul's desire in this delightful piece!! Love it! Thank you Micheal for stopping by my page and your kind words. Much love and light.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2012 1:27:00 PM

This is a purely delightful write...I really enjoyed the powerful words you have scribed within this poem! What a lovely piece my friend, Great Work!!