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Dreamtime: Secret Garden

alone... in a vast meadow, silently counting ruby explosions of rare, lion's tooth orchids; Hidden under tiny royal cloaks of elliptical emerald leaf canopies, so beautiful.... I'm briefly blinded he sits watching us sweetly, the blue of his eyes are unmoving calm, as the waters of Nineveh Flourishing under the umbrage of an ovaloid optic embrace, he settles into our garden of love. He is delightful, concisely pre-arranged, just like us. Written in collaboration with James Marshall Goff

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Date: 8/8/2024 3:30:00 PM
Terrific collaboration between you and Jim Vie. :)
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Date: 8/4/2024 9:43:00 AM
"he settles into our garden of love. He is delightful, concisely pre-arranged, just like us." Very lovely, inspiring!
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Date: 8/3/2024 1:55:00 AM
This is a great collaboration. Great description of a garden. Wonder what a lion's tooth orchid looks like.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/3/2024 5:00:00 AM
Hi Victor! Shape of a small honeysuckle bloom * 10!
Date: 8/2/2024 6:00:00 PM
you and jimbo make beautiful nature poetry together...love how the metaphors livened the scene, vie!
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Date: 8/2/2024 9:18:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Date: 8/2/2024 6:37:00 AM
Collab with Jimbo? How cool is that? Love this one, but wondering who is this mysterious "he?"
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Date: 8/2/2024 5:46:00 AM
Delightful!
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Date: 8/2/2024 3:57:00 AM
Sometimes the poets with the least amount of words can stir your soul, such as Jim did here. Enjoy the poem fellow soupers.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/2/2024 5:12:00 AM
Goodness Mystic! almost an embryonic, engulfing love you so creatively sculpted, craving; of the human heart!

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