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Written 28th November 2024

Dreams within dreams Poety Contest - Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

“Thought streams manifested the dream I was both subject and object Methinks things are not what they seem Which illusion do we reject”
I feel a sweet kiss placed upon my brow I hear words telling me the why's and how That the hopes that'd took flight and flew away Are sure to come back to me some fine day. In a dream I'm whisked off to foreign shore Where I weep because my poor heart is sore Sadly I pick up grains of golden sand Cradling them gently in palm of my hand. Slowly those grains slip away into sea Just as the way true love deserted me Joy of heart creeps back in mystical scenes Within fantastical dreams most supreme Streams of thoughts reside inside my dreams I came to believe love would come in beams It's pointless grieving for what might have been Wishing to be living dreams within dreams.

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Date: 11/19/2024 10:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative dream write. Good dreams are the best kind to have. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 11/19/2024 10:19:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, may all your dreams be sweet dreams, good luck in the contest. Xx
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Date: 11/19/2024 9:34:00 AM
The only strange dream I had was that despite waking three times at night, I had a dream that repeated itself, though it was inconclusive. Your poem is well written, a dream with an illusion in the dream. You did well. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/19/2024 6:15:00 AM
Be nice if we could choose our dreams, we'd never get out of bed lol Good luck in the contest Beryl. Tom
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